Storytelling 101d

Thursday, November 8th, 2007

I’m discovering this blogging thing to be pretty tough, so, in an effort to have something interesting (I hope) to say for the next couple of weeks, it might be a fun time to talk about how Zip and Li’l Bit get made.

The first step in the process is the writing. My tools of choice are a plain old notebook, and a ball point pen. Here’s a scan of today’s page as I originally wrote it up.

Sample Page 16

Sometimes the idea that I have that’s driving the page may be an image that’s stuck in my head, other times it may be a phrase or something a character is saying, so I like to write both the dialogue and the pictures at the same time. For this page, it occurred to me that if Zip fell on his head, he’d fall on his shadow’s head as well, so the image in the fourth panel started everything off and the rest of the page was created around that idea.

Another reason I like to create both the text and the pictures together is that the gesture, or body language, of the figures is very important to me at this stage of the process. I want to find out not only what the characters are saying, but how they are saying it. If I can figure that out early on, then I feel like I’ve got a pretty solid foundation to build the rest of my work on. In this example, the sketches and dialogue are, obviously, pretty rough, but I think everything that is happening is still pretty clear. If it wasn’t, then I’d want to make the changes before I’d gone much further. It’s much easier for me to change something, or toss it out if it sucks, when I haven’t invested a lot of effort on it.

So, that’s all there is to writing. ;) Next time, I’ll talk about designing the page.

6 Responses to “Storytelling 101d”

  1. Corey Says:

    I love your commentary, I hope it continues.

  2. Claudio Says:

    Bump or lump?
    ยบ:-)

  3. Jake Says:

    I’m really loving your Storytelling 101 commentary. Keep it up. It is great to get a glimpse at your thought process. I’d love to hear more about your coloring philosophy, inking, and penciling too.

  4. Trade Says:

    Hey folks, thanks for the comments. I really appreciate them… and I love the little guy with the bump on his head, or is it a lump?

    There’s definitely more Storytelling 101 to come. One of the great things about webcomics is that I get to do everything, write, draw, ink, color, letter, promote (well, I suck at that part), but in the webcomics world, I can do it all, so there’s plenty to talk about. :)

  5. Ashley Scott Says:

    Hello webmaster…Thanks for the nice read, keep up the interesting posts..what a nice Saturday

  6. Trade Says:

    Thanks for the note, Ashley. It is a nice Saturday, isn’t it? I think Saturday is my favorite day of the week. Unless I’ve got a headache, and then it’s because Friday was my favorite.

Leave a Reply